Chapter 6

well this chapter was more about gatsby's past. it kind of explains how he obtained his money.  he knew a guy named dan cody who when he died, left all his money to gatsby. but gatsby's mistress (whats a mistress?) wouldnt let him have it or something. i thought that was stupid for two reasons. One, i dont know who she is and why she decides that gatsby cant have free money. Two if somebody dies and wants you to have something of theres, nobody should get in the way of you getting it. shes being selfish.

Chapter 4 & 5

 In chapter 4: new day, all is well. It spends the next page explaining in great detail on what it looks like. then it gets back to the story and that's where i got lost. the only part that made any sense is when Gatsby was explaining how his family died. now i know he has money, but i still have no clue who Gatsby is! honesty i cant follow this story. i found my self trying to re-read the whole chapter to see if it would make anymore sense. it didn't. In chapter 5: umm...i dont know

Freewrite

1. Why are you apprehensive about your writing? 2. what do you fear about sharing your writing?
3. What is the best case scenario that could occur today when you share your writing?
4. What is the worse case scenario that could occur today while sharing your writing?


1. i don't know for sure what apprehensive means, so im going to guess its shy or scared. I i think that it has to do with my natural competition and i know that mine isn't the best one out there.
2. i fear that my writing wont make sense to other people
3. umm...yes
4. to not have a paper and or forget that paper at home

The cold and snow.

This cold, the one that has very recently showed up out of no were makes me want to make a giant melting snow machine so i can clean off the streets. i mean what good is the snow on the streets if it doesnt give us a snow day? but the real reason i want the snow to go away is so that i can get out my old longbourd again. it sucks having to walk places when i do go places, instead of sitting in my basement all day playing th world of warcraft. who ever invented snow should stop. NAOWAH!

kbai...

the awakening

The awakening was kind of lame because it didn’t have very much detail. I felt like it didn’t clarify the end at all. It just says that she got tiered and that’s it. That’s not even a proper ending. That’s like me ending my response right now by saying “and then I got tiered.”

chapter 29 and 30

After the guy on stage is done, jurgus goes and talks to that ostrinski guy. He tells jurgus about a party or something and they go to his house. I don't remember when he came into the story. Anyways, they talk about socalizm and boring stuff for like 30 minutes. Stuff like where they came from, how they got taken advantage of and under paid. Then I fell a sleep.

End

chapters 27 and 28

after jurgus got out of court. he walked home with merija and they talked about boring stuff. but i think it will be an important part of the story because its always like that. the stuff you think isn't important, turns out to be the moral of the whole story. any ways i thought that he got lucky that he didn't have to do time in jail. also that his friend gets his bailout lower so he could pay it. but then he goes out and looks for a job. after a day i think he gives up and goes to a play or something. he falls asleep in there and snores, then the book basically just tells of what the guy on stage says. about how the society isn't working as well as it could. i don't know how but he stretches that out into like 3 pages. oh and there was some lady next to him that he finds extremely interesting and stares at he for a long time. jurgus might get married again. that would be weird, because his other wife just died and all of his family to so why would he want to go through that again.